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I like the whole atmosphere of this story. It draws you in from the very beginning and allows you to visualize every movement and action of the characters. Characters are well thought out, and personality traits are relateable. However, I've spotted a few grammatical errors, but they don't take way from the story. You might want to go through the chapters and correct a few errors, just to improve readability. Keep up the good work![img=recommend]