Is this..... The end???

Bruh i don't fully know what the word simp means, but I'm pretty sure being honest aren't the actions that could make you a simp

Like some people, for me him endangering his family is too OOC considering how overprotective he is. On my opinion, the other guys comment about having better rewards but limiting his power and him being able to remove his limiter at the cost of his rewards is the best You could also make it so that if he or a part of his family (or just him and ZEROTWO since she's the only one i actually care a lot about to the point that i would drop this if she died, its cold but it's just my personal opinion you could ignore) are about to die they would automatically be transported to a safer world(all of them together). You could make him go to SAO, i mean he could most likely hack the nerve gear and wouldn't get killed by the brain fry but SAO would still be a bit of a challenge since it's a game and he wouldn't be able to use his system skills inside the game without hacking it. Just for a bit of slice of life and some comedy before going to a more twisted or serious world just to spice up the story. Well 😔 i only actually have about 3000 words of writing experience on wattpad and everything after the other guys comment is just theory's of mine based on some of the things i know and average IQ thinking. As I've said these are just my opinions on how to make a more interesting story.

I know I'm late but why not just use time stop

*Akame ga kill flashbacks*

What a shame, i finally found something good on webnovel but no the author got the info wrong and thought that kage level was genin level. I mean i could understand if she could beat him in range attacks but in taijutsu, no. The ancient one is strong with her magic but she is still fragile like a normal human and even if you tell an excuse like "she has more battle experience" you can't actually think that a martial arts master with 2 decades of experience to hit faster and block bullets from 2 machine guns with explosive ammo right. The battle should have gone like ----the ancient one showed hostile behavior and got knocked out, end of battle----- *sigh* dropped i guess

Just read a few paragraphs of chapter one. The mc being collective and calm he asked the voice he heard. Guess what, he fvcking stutters and shouts the first word he said

Still mixed feelings

Mmm... I'm not disappointed with the ending since I've read things with worse endings than this. It was just anticlimactic for me, and the whole fight was pointless in the end so i have mixed feelings

It's funny since this will probably be funnier than the comedy ffs on this website

It seems that this day was fated to come, the day where some sh!ty plot gets in my way of enjoying something so droped. I don't know why but mc's who have summons, companions, or things they made who are stronger than them puts me off, for me it makes a 5 star into a 2 star. on some novels i try to read the next chapters but i have no energy to continue on on this one. Oh yeah also i was really disappointed cuz i was really exited for the day he was transported but... Guess not (Not hating okay so don't splash hate buckets everywhere)

Although I'm late I'll still do a reaction comment What i fell right now is disappointment, for so much buildup it was a disappointing ending it was like watching a series of good 2-hour movies on the day off when your not working then watching the 30 minute finale scene expecting a satisfying ending but in the end you feel ripped off. For so much time he spent on training his skill it felt super anticlimactic on how he couldn't even knock out 25% of the enemies, and the worst is that he was the cause of his own loss, you may be saying "he defeated 700 people at level 3 while he's only level 2" you may be right but not being able to even defeat 25% of his enemies makes me feel like his a fool

What the fvkc

1.Mc dies 2.mc gets wishes but 1 of them is not fulfilled 3.mc is nerfed 4. When the mc finally had the chance to grow as strong as Ddraig in real form he chooses a strong familiar over it he practically said “oh I'm a retarded shit that wants a strong familiar over a power that can make gods feel fear” , probably because the author doesn't want the mc getting stronger because, EHEM... he can obviously buy a strong familiar after killing a god, such a retarded mc, probably the author has watched too much pokemon but hates to admit it 5. I drop, hate then leave

Disappointing . Good at first, i was a little bothered by the weak skill he got but still better than nothing... Is what i thought. Its okay if he didn't get an op skill but merlin being able to know he's reincarnated is a huge letdown. I'm gonna read a few more chapter's because of potential but I'll drop if he doesn't fix this s**t in about 5 chapters , and if its really bad then I'm gonna give a bad rating . . . Not hating, just saying the truth but its mostly because I'm extremely disappointed

Great start but after chapter 8 everything is dumb. They merge souls they get stronger... No scratch that mc gets small buff companion basically gets 75% of mc's power mc doesn't get companions op talent because author doesn't want the mc to get strong too fast even thou many people have explained that he should have and companion becomes op. Mc gets power all 5 elements but but doesn't get a power-up shown whatsoever because author doesn't want mc to be stronger but companion gets stronger. Mc gets power up in the form of mokuton but companion has more talent than him in this, note that companion got his talent but only 30% weaker. mc is good at seals but it is to make his companion stronger. by the looks of it mc will get a harem way stronger than him in the form of tsundae and some other strong girl. Basically a weak mc relying on girls 'Companion' is also a girl by the name of konan My take on this is that the author wants to nerf the mc as much as possible for the sake of nonexistent plot and has watched to much pokemon

And I've only read till ch. 15 i just said this here cause it has a higher chance of being noticed

I'm gonna ask if someone re-reads this or someone's just nice but yea. my question is when the mc gets to actually rival a high jonnin, this is actually a really good fan-fic but I'm not a fan of weak mc's its okay if on the start their weak but if after 50 chapters their still weak then I'm not a fan of that, well actually it's okay if he doesn't rival high jonnin on chapter 40-60 just tell me when he actually gets stronger than konan. Once again I'm not bulls**ting the auther here I'm just not a fan of mc's being weaker than the girl lead/harem, well all weak mcs for that matter. 3.9-4.2-star for me if he gets a lot stronger and actually gets a brain in the next 5-10 chapters totally 5-star. The last I'm gonna say this - I'm not bulls***ting you author I'm just not a fan of weak mcs

I don't know how you find an almost identical things entertaining its almost as if we are reading a lazy man's diary its boring ( don't take this as hate just stating the fact's ( and that right there was me purposely being harsh ) )

So basically its reincarnated as a slime but in another guy's perspective basically boring and basically a story about a lazy man watching a real life anime but for us its the same. i don't know how this got a 4.5(might change in the future) star rating, I've seen much much MUCH better novels with only 4.2 or 4.4