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godisdisappointed

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New to writing seriously and would love feedback and tips.

2020-09-20 JoinedUnited States
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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to Sagely_pervert

    We’ll get there some day

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to SirC

    Im trying to write as a progression to get to that point. He’s just gonna fake it til he makes it for now

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Commented

    This is actually a really cool idea 👌🏼

    But Yuria's next words fascinated Damien as she said, "I know. But the interesting thing is that just like us, she has her own cultivation of sorts. So right now, her cultivation is basically no different than that of a child. And the only way you can nurture it is by infusing her with your soul and ethereal energy constantly but only a fraction of it. Since your cultivation right now is too powerful for her to handle. But first remember, you have to start with providing her soul energy, and after she becomes loyal to you, then you can nourish her with your ethereal energy as well."
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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to Sovereign_Turtle

    It’s the result of his good leadership

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to SrONU

    Oh 100% Ima fs develop him in that direction

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to RaLegacy

    Dude im literally on your patreon your novel is great

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Commented

    Hehe GALE empore catches WIND of this

    This was a very risky deed since the moment the Gale Emperor catches wind of this, there might be hardly any places where Damien could hide.
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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to PRIMORDIAL_SAINT

    I one hundred percent agree I’m personally working on creating expression within my writing, and just my writing it general. I always appreciate the tips so if their are any more just lmk 😊

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to DeusVult55

    😂 For now, im working on a whole new set of character art atm

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 389 Do You Believe In Past Life?
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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to SrONU

    100% man I’m still working to improve my writing so look forward to it! I have big plans for this story

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to Butt_Fvck

    Its because of your name that god is disappointed

    "Agreed" Ed and Griffin's relationship would be better from today onward.
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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to godisdisappointed

    This is a taste of what weisheng looks like Still editing and doing finer details but im still getting better

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Posted

    Just a shameless author reviewing his own work 😉 Just wanna let current and future readers know i appreciate all of you and hope you stick along with this wild ride I am super invested in this story and will slowly but surely animate/draw all of the significant characters and cover art(hopefully some nsfw too😏) I bought myself a new ipad just for this too. Well anywho adiós

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to YungBrosketi

    Thank you for the review 😊 and thank you for the tips im slowly getting used to making sure my future plans don’t get in the way of proper development, because trust me i have huge plans for this novel

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to Dayne_Go

    This is not my original art however i am currently drawing my own which is what is slowing down my uploads

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to MikaelZero

    yeh I know, it just felt less used and more believable in this context.

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to BEND0VER_420

    If that's all you expect then you're in for a real curveball ;)

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to BEND0VER_420

    I liked weisheng bc the name means “greatness is born” so yeh

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  • godisdisappointed
    godisdisappointed2yr
    Replied to BEND0VER_420

    Liu weisheng

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