francis_daigle
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2020-09-20 JoinedGlobal
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francis_daigle4 years agoCommentedSee this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
- francis_daigle5 years agoPosted
Hello, I just want to tell the writer that is story is a mess. You need to add more detail of Who talk or whos POV. The story is on a good start if you pass on the messy writing.
- francis_daigle5 years agoCommented
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon