At first I thought it was going to be like a rewrite of the eternal fanfic but its starting to change the direction and I like it. It would be good to see where you take this new order. Also it would be cool to see his lightsaber colored Grey. As to represent his alignment. Just an idea, if you like.

Thanks for the Chapter!

If you are so afraid of the truth about Cersei and Jaime. Kill them both, after they are dead rumors can't do anything. Because even in westros people don't like to insult the dead. And without them nothing can be proved.

I don't know why but this feels stupid. You make a villian greater than voldemort (which in my opinion, you made him too unfathomable to be realistically be defeated by the mc) than you make him the biggest enemy of mc's family and then you oh so helpfully make his grandson be a nuisance for the mc in school. Now, that's alright it's your story you can do it. But now you are dragging other 11 old innocents into your war. And expect that the villian's grandson would be honorable enough not to involve his father or grandfather. Is this crazy or am I missing something ?

That's not the point, what I meant was that they don't even think about it. But when its convenient for them, the heroically swoop in and save the day and bash Dumbledore. Its hypocrisy at its highest. And there are hundreds of ways. He could have sent a letter to his aunt anonymously and to daily prophet.

Ok maybe Tywin won't kill him. But he could teach him some "lesson" like he taught Tyrion with his first wife.

somehow Tywin thinks Lancel is dangerous

And yet there are good people in GOT, but that's not the point. Killing Tywin is the right choice. If he doesn't kill Tywin and somehow thinks that Lancel is too dangerous or some other bullshit. He won't hesitate for a moment. The man doesn't care about his family, he cares about the family name.

The hard on this guy has for twyin is really something. He says twyin didn't do anything to his family. Has he even seen the series or read the books. The way he treated Tyrion people Don't treat their livestock.

You know what I find disgusting? The writers who write HP SI and know of Harry's abuse and don't do anything till they can find right time to bash Dumbledore about it. I mean come on the guy was abused first 11 years of his life, and you don't even think about it. But now he just have to go there for two months and here is the SI being the saviour. Also don't say that you could not before for self protection. You didn't have to do much, go use your incredible stealth techniques and use imperius curse on the dursleys to treat the kid like a human.