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Its golden
mistake
hair is now bit shorter
he did not even use a percent of his power, like he was holding back by alot
Thank you for your feedback, and I appreciate your honesty. I apologize if the writing style came across as overly poetic and exaggerated. I completely understand your perspective and will take your suggestion to heart. I'll work on toning down the poetic elements and aiming for a more balanced and natural writing style that aligns better with the story. Your input is valuable in helping me refine the narrative, and I hope the adjustments will make for a more enjoyable reading experience.
Yes it happens after the character development
the random girl would've probably died if he didn't make his move n the death of the mc is what gave him the chance to become overpowered. You also gotta admire the mc's bravery and courage, But the mc isn't always gonna be like this, unless it benefits him, he won't save another life again.
I mean, isn't it a good thing he died?.
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Imagine this but with golden eyes