That was great. I'm glad they were able to help him.

I agree!

I love the details of the characters. I can't wait to find out more about them especially the "bad boy".

That sounds like a really good idea. It would not only help Nate but the rest of the group too.

That was excellent. I'm so glad you were able to write it. I liked the details. I can't wait for more. Thanks!

Yes, he is naive. I agree.

What a great start and well written too. I am looking forward to reading more.

I agree. I love how the friendship has been built up over the romance. I think it will make their eventual relationship more meaningful. I really want that for Todd. He is amazing. I enjoy his other relationships/ interactions with the people around him as well.

I have really enjoyed this novel. I have enjoyed the world these characters have been forced to live in. I look forward to reading each chapter because it has the right amount of suspense. You grow to care for the characters especially Todd. The only suggestions for improvement I will make are for grammar especially the appropriate use of periods and for more detailed character descriptions. I also wish to thank the author for the wonderful ideas and descriptions about alchemy.

This was an enjoyable chapter. I'm looking forward to more in the future.

Todd really proved himself. No one can ever say he is a useless alchemist ever again.

Todd is amazing!

Wow! I am moving on to the next chapter. I want to see what happens next.

This chapter was nicely written. I'm glad that things are improving for them.

That was fun to read! I was hoping that they would all survive. What a relief.

I agree. It's an enjoyable story but there were grammar mistakes that detracted from the story.

I liked the positivity of the group despite their trials. I like that they have support in each other. I noticed mistakes and I am glad you will eventually fix them. I want you to get more readers for your story.

Interesting details about alchemy. I'm looking forward to continuing on to the next chapter.

I'm impressed. This is a very interesting story.

This book hooked me into webnovel.com. I am really loving it and can't wait to continue reading it. I am already up to Chapter 16 and I am really enjoying it.