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SquidwardTentacles

SquidwardTentacles

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2020-09-19 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • SquidwardTentacles
    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to Riassuba

    Thanks for the correction, fixed it!

    "I don't mind. The reward is a private audience with Lord Azar. You get to talk to him and ask him whatever you want. If you're daring, you could even try to join his ranks. His private army is the second most powerful force in Zarxion, first would unmistakably be The Knights."
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to Riassuba

    Probably not!

    Ken walked up to his bed, turned around, spread his arms wide open to the side and fell onto his bed. He said one thing to himself before going to sleep.
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to Bigfish

    Thanks for the feedback, glad you're enjoying it so far and hope you can stick along for the future and let me know your thoughts on the journey!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Start Of A New Adventure?
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I wonder about that, I mean it is Ken!

    Ch 22 Chapter 22: A Mission?
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I think there'll be a bit more training, but I guess Zad does give off the vibe of being quite a clumsy weak-looking character!

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: A Chance To Grow Stronger [3]
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to Septic_Red

    Thanks for the feedback, and I will be sure to keep the chapters longer from now!

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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to Septic_Red

    Thanks for taking the time to read this, glad you were able to somewhat enjoy it!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: The Start Of A New Adventure?
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I was originally planning on including half the battle in this chapter but thought it might've been best to have it play out entirely in the next chapter, so it didn't get cut off. I'll definitely try to make them longer though!

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: A Chance To Grow Stronger
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  • SquidwardTentacles
    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    Who knows!

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: The Troll Problem
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I think the surprise may have came from Ken being so young and having that kind of strength

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: And The Winner Is...
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to zrx_8950

    Cra is pretty strong but I don’t think he’ll be able to compete with Ken

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Ken vs Cra [Part 1]
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I guess we’ll be able to see very soon!

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Ken vs Cra [Part 1]
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I wonder about that he seems like a very formidable foe!

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Cra The Crusher!
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I agree I guess we'll have to see how the story progresses to learn more about him!

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: A New Ally?
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to zrx_8950

    Thanks for letting me know what you think about the story/world since that is my main focus and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Everything you mentioned, I will try very hard to improve.

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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to duuurrzak

    I appreciate the review and will definitely work on the stuff you listed in the review since I also think it might be better to be more clear.

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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to zrx_8950

    Yeah, it would most likely be easier for Ken to use his magic freely but since he was low on mana he needed to rely on those weapons instead. I'm not too sure what power stones are, but I think you can use them to raise the novels power ranking. At the moment this one hasn't unlocked them yet.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Situation Just Got A Whole Lot Worse
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    Yep, he snatched the sword from a villager, and the other one was the one he threw at the wolf last chapter.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Situation Just Got A Whole Lot Worse
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to zrx_8950

    I appreciate the support and thanks for reading!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: A Problematic Night
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    SquidwardTentacles3yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    I agree, and you never know, maybe he'll use it soon!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: A Problematic Night
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