Komandos_Komandi

But it doesn't egxist in the world of the Game of Thrones tho?

So we have Jorah learning how to be the WereBear as skinchanging doesn't work like this. Cool but that's not possible in the world of the GoT...

I don't know what kind of drugs You was taking when You wrote this chapter but stay away from them...

20 tons or 20000 tons? Because 20 tons is around 2.2 milion gold dragons and while bit low price for Valyrian steel sword I can believe that Lannisters are able to give it just like that but 1000 times that? Yeah, no... Even if the mine didn't dry out yet there is no way in hell that they put out such amount of money at once. Besides selling a Valyrian steel sword to Lannisters is bad idea anyway...

Nice chapter but I have one problem with it tho. If it is 265AC Dacey Mormont can't be 9 years old already since she was born 271-277...

MC is supposedly super inteligent because he's reborn etc. yet he is catching idiot ball really often doing stuff do stupid that I'm wondering if he have brain at all Important characters act horribly out of character almost all the time but alright that's AU and let's roll with that MC trying to stand away from the court and Kings Landing? Fine by me. And then we have chapter 112 when MC become suck puppet of ROB that remake him from stupid but interesting character to one dimensional copy pasta that MUST become KING and kill!!! all humans that stand in his way for POWAH!!!

Only thing that You can say is good in this fic is the idea for the system... The rest is bad and brainless enough to make Your own brain melt out of Your head...

Autor once again show how little he knows about the setting... As Targaryen MC can have more than one wife... Thanks to the 'Exceptionalism' doctrine that Jehaerys I and his hand septon Barth coined out so ending of this chapter and MC's mental debate is invalid

Jessamyn Redfort become Jansif Redfort and shift between male and female every sentence... Redfort and Runestone somehow are next to eachother...

So Meraxes become Meylas and MC with Vermithor just gone savage on Seasmoke and Leanor Valyrion... What the fuuuuudge? Idiot ball incoming...