how did their villa turn into a restaurant? Dear author, please proofread before you post. I have spent so many coins to read your story, while the plot and characters are entertaining, having spent as much as I have to get to this point, the number of sentences I have to re-read to attempt to figure out what you are saying and the number of times you have written a wrong name/changed the characters names is astounding. example : Mu Xin aka Mu Ying aka Mu Fei aka Mu Xiao. Chu Rou aka Chu Qi (also typed her as if she was Chu Tain, that was confusing when her and Sheng Sheng went out and got tipsy a number of chapters back.) as a platform for on going story's I expect there to be a few errors, but it's almost if you're typing the story without looking and posting before ever looking to see what you actually typed.

is she Mu FEI, Mu Xio or mu Ying? so far the story line is decent but you keep changing the weak sisters name. please use consistency with the names. thank you

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Gahhhhhh!!! I'm screaming at Nate for being so cold to my Emily. she is too kind to be treated as such. I'm hoping for a second chance soul mate with the storm prince, or something tragic to happen to Laya?!? *snickers*

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🥰 I laughed and cried so hard while reading this novel. it's a good read but they seemed to have wrapped up the ending quite quickly. this is the first time I've spent 50 coins to unlock 1 chapter but thankfully that wasn't until the last 3 chapters

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oh Zhenbai... I can already tell he is going to do something stupid 🙄 but I really want them to work!!! I want more chapters !!!!!

i want more chapters!!!!!!!

if her legs were already starting to turn in the dungeon, what's going to happen when they are at the council and she still hasn't taken the salt bath?

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ooooh Simon is portraying King Calhoun from The Crowns obsession ... PS if you have not read it.. I highly recommend you do so... do it now!!! Ash is still only posting one chapter a day on this one... kill some time support Ash and read it now!!

weiwei has an opportunity that every girl whose ever lost herself into a novel has ever dreamed of... to become a part of the story and even change to story completely while finding a true romance of her own. I can't wait to see what her new future will hold

I read this while it was on hiatus and still tittle "the girl in the casket" and I have to say I'm loving the re-write so far! your an amazing author and I can't wait to find out what's really going on !!

genius doctor: black belly miss

shen yanxio is my second favorite female lead... Jun we xia is my favorite. however I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds

twins im voting for twins

I really think that Alicia and Zeke are meant to be like Abi and Alex but because he's been playing the role of spy, some how Dinah is manipulating him. but by him telling Alicia to come at him with Hillingdon intent I feel he is trying to break free from her grasp.

Madeline is a beautiful village girl with a hidden lineage who yearns for a simple life, Calhoun is the king who can't help but steal her heart as she stole his at first sight. this slow burn keeps me up at night wanting for more. Ash is a brilliant writer and I look forward to more from the crowns obsession.

tell me Ethan rushes to the set, finds Kylie and talks to her about what he's discovered and they find away to fix things.... stephan CAN'T have her!!!