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Lamar_Sineath

Lamar_Sineath

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2020-09-16 JoinedGlobal
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath10mth
    Commented

    Grade Sin should be Grade S in

    Ch 55 Upcoming Monthly Exam
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    spacing issues

    The disgust on the girl's face increased even more and she waved her small hand. "No need to explain. I understand perfectly!"
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    spacing issues

    Having experienced lessons in history and swordsmanship, Xiao Lin could sense the paramount importance the school attached to the present batch of freshmen. Even though the girl in front of him looked petite, Xiao Lin guessed that she was a graduate, who might even be centuries old, like Professor Dai.
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    spacing

    "If a mage like me fails to sense an ordinary person's presence within ten meters, then I might as well quit this school and head back to Earth to sell tofu! Don't you think so?" The girl's words were very cutting and she was not as sweet as her voice suggested. With that, Xiao Lin's impression of her as a charming girl-next-door crumbled all at once.
    altalt
    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    words incorrectly joined together

    Xiao Lin smiled and greeted the others, but he did not receive an eager response.
    altalt
    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
    detail
  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    began dancing around

    Ch 19 Professor Dai
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    Stupidification

    "Hello everyone! I'm the president of Dawn Academy's student union. Our dean might be late due to delays on the road, so I'll say a few words to everyone first. As someone who has gone through everything you've all gone through, I understand your feelings, your confusion, your restlessness, and your stupefaction…"
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    in order words should be in other words

    One other difference the Zombie King had from the ordinary zombies was that it would chase the crowd, and its speed was not inferior to theirs. In order words, even if they turned around and ran toward the safe area right now, the Zombie King was likely to catch up. 
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath11mth
    Commented

    soldier, not solider

    After finishing up, it was time for them to rest and sleep for the night. The solider behind the counter instructed the group where to go next. They did as he ordered and were led to a building near the edge of the Shelter.
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    interesting start but some wierd vocabulary

    Ch 1 This World Is Very Dangerous
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    Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
    Eastern · Oof
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    best chapter yet. good grammar for a change.

    Ch 75 Not A Game
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Replied to LordRhyolith

    has to be human

    Ch 75 Not A Game
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
    detail
  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Replied to alecss

    I don't agree. everyone needs handicaps

    Ch 74 Fight or Wait
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    payed isn't a word. what kind of spell check do they have?

    Ch 73 Skillbook grinding
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    looking for an ability with fire

    Ch 71 Storage room
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    he went from 880/800 to 40/1600

    Ch 66 First Kill
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    if he was always born with black hair....how many times was he born?

    Ch 52 Blood evolver
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Lamar_Sineath
    Lamar_Sineath3yr
    Commented

    oopsie, now he's in trouble!

    Ch 17 Level up
    altalt
    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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