I really like the story, the best Part is that it plays in the past. i Hope there will be more charackter development for His crew. The only thing i really don't Like are conpletly illogical things Like Zorros arrival. i Hope you do not put random charackters that have nothing to so with the worldbuilding in the story. Overall i enjoy Reading your fanfiction and Hope you will continue to Update this interesting Story. thank you for your hard Work!