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Dont rewrIte them. Let them stay and be a reminder, but i would tone the torture down. I almost stopped reading after the Nathan scene. Idk how much worse it gets but Ill see as I go. Overall the story is good, his abilities are great, his family is a well rounded group, and his enemies are fantastic. im just not one for torture. my personal opinion
Man I have made it this far, but i dont think im going to keep reading. i understand hes a demon lord, but the constant graphic torture is too much. Make him powerful, and even evil if you must, but you have gone entirely too deep into the torture thing. tone it back and focus on his family, new abilities, intense battles, and overall strong story elements. lay off of the torture man. thats my two cents