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captain planet?
good storyline though confusing at times due to the multiple parallel universes. character development was good and not too overwhelming
so far the book is starting out good. the storyline is interesting and the MC is not overpowered just different. keep it up
lots of translation errors " everywhere disrupting the flow of the chapter
some translation issues to English, specifically " after most words
need to expand the story world a bit, the combat scenes need more detail but overall a good start
great book so far
so far this has been a decent read
good character development, unique storyline focusing on cooking. overall a great read with both comedy and drama. interesting blending the different mythologies together.
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
so far so good
good read so far