The title caught my eye. The formatting is killing me. The spacing doesn't read well. Some words are split between lines. If you break it down into smaller paragraphs you will get many more readers.

If you release an extra chapter today, I'll gladly give you a review. 😂

I greatly appreciate the review and will keep your suggestions in mind. Do you read on mobile or pc?

The story is posted twice you may want to fix that author

Thank you for the comment. For some reason, it did not upload the entire chapter when I posted it. I apologize for the inconvenience and will be verifying the upload worked in the future. I have never ran into this problem before.

Thank you for reading.

no. not know

I looked it up know this definitely is not a slave MC.

I am unsure of what you mean by slave mc.

Thank you for the comment and for reading. I hope you enjoy.

I originally intended for Hadorix's shapeshifting form to be a wolf. It looks like I missed updating a few things when I changed it. I greatly appreciate you aiding me in finding and correcting the mistakes.

I greatly appreciate the fact that you commented and are reading my story. I hope you are enjoying your readthrough, and look forward to further feedback from all of my readers.

How often do chapters release for this book?

yeeehaw

nooo

please

release more chapters soon

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great book

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