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RavineAbyss

RavineAbyss

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Just A Young Teen Trying To Write A Novel

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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
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    Seeing the upload schedule the author seems to have motivation issues, but nevertheless, the story is great and has tremendous potential. So, please......for the love of God, maintain a stable release schedule

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
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    Shameless author reviewing his own story. Hope to enjoy the novel!!

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
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    I liked the premise. But there were some things I could pick on. Still, the premise so far, has developed in a wonderful manner. I liked the Main character. Keep up the good work!

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
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    There's an opening quotation mark, no closing one. "Apprentice, you made a mistake, do you know what you should have done?" The martial.............

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
    Posted

    Has potential. Although only 2 chapters have been released, I found the pacing and narration quite nice. Keep up the good work!

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
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    Only 4 chapters, so far, thus cannot say much. But the story developed till now, is well presented. I found chapter 2, the most exciting out of the chapters so, far. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes in the future.

  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss4 years ago
    Replied to Pril_Debbarma

    Actually, no. I did not keep any tags about romance as the novel's primary focus would never be romance. It has more to do with the protagonist's personality. So, it would be more of a survival, mystery, and fantasy novel.

Demonic Requiem: The Epitome of Evil

He feared none but himself. As a human, Elias walked a cruel path. His path only got crueller as he became a demon. Born as the son of the most powerful man in the continent, but lived a life no worse than a slave. His only friend being solitude. The further he endured, the further he began to lose his humanity. Even a point came when he lost all his rationality and lived as a senseless demon. But no matter the obstacle. He endured. He learned. He survived. He evolved. As the rumors of his endeavors spread, many feared him. Many respected him. Many bowed before him. Nonetheless, Elias continued to walk on his path. The path of a demon. As time passed, Elias continued to terrorize the world with his evil and devious means. People deemed him as a threat who could no longer be ignored. Many empires united. They allied, and an all-out war started. But, be it the cruelty of fate or their foolishness, the alliance lost. Elias stood as the lone survivor, but alas, he loses his life from an unforeseen cause. But for better or worse, his story still seems to have not ended. Elias gets reborn back when he was young, and the path he walked once, he will walk again, but this time the one who suffers will not be him. What to expect: This story is based on the concept of "What if a villain, gets a second chance?". Hence it contains a lot of torture, torment, and inhumanity. Revenge or such feelings do not drive Elias, so it's not a revenge story. There won't be any rape scenes or incest. It's also not a story like that. But expect some cruelty and torture along the way. Also, it's a slow-paced novel. In short: A lunatic who terrorized the world with devious power and cruel means gets reborn, this time becoming even more powerful and ruthless. Link for the Cover Art: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/589760513698059849/

RavineAbyss · Urban
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7 Chs