Congrats Author!💜 More success to you!

Do keep it as it is. Its one of the more unique plots I have seen in a Marvel fanfic and I am enjoying it so far.

the moral and existential nihilism in Jasmine's ascension is nice but too much of something can be bad too. I think that there could be something that can anchor her being.

Pretty tame for a first-time yuri lemon scene. Thought it would be more explicit and vulgar but the scene is decent.

I think it works too. Its not that confusing and kinda cute. They're both hard-to-read women but they act like a strict mom/daughter duo.

I'm giving a 5.0 review because I am looking forward for more updates.‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

I'm giving 5 stars because I have high hopes for this fanfic. I've been waiting for months about any updates and to read these first chapters, I'm so glad and thankful that you are trying to continue the story with your own ideas. Looking forward for new chapters!💚💚

I read this is in a manga but the informal equivalent of aniki in female term is anego.

+1

I'd say keep the system but put some focus on the world building. I think that having Jin have a prominent societal role due to being a princess should have more explanation on how they actually made their nation be recognized by the world as a whole and not something that's just passively mentioned.

its safe to be prepared than nothing/ do nothing*

Reality Manipulation huh? if her expertise on that evolves, can't she just change the imprinting altogether? Great chapter tho can't wait for more.

"I could only cover my ears" can replace that phrase and you should put a period instead of a comma because both sentences can stand alone.

picked up*

Thanks for the chapter. I know that you're aiming for some character development but the progress in this chapter is kinda vague, it seemed to be a passing thought which is good because I feel that you're intending to have at least an entire chapter for that.

imma guess its viego

oooh miss fortune. Huh didn't expect a league character but a pleasant surprise nonetheless.

jm confused is anker supposed to be anchor?

Looking forward for the new story💚. I trust that this story is in good hands since I am also looking forward for ms. ally's ff now that she's back.

Your computations can be misunderstood. Remove the equation in the parenthesis or remove the 123. [123(3+120)×4] would have the answer of 60,516 and not 492.