For some reason, it seems to me that Otto will succeed and Deiron will eventually move to Essos, build his empire as well

Madly in love with this story, I am not against interludes and narrations of other characters, but only if they are colorful people (Stanis, Robert, Tywin, John Aren, etc.) Pov A petty lord who was not even mentioned in the original book - causes boredom and I quickly flipped through the floor of the chapter

keep it up! as it was sung in one famous song "I do what I want, I want implants, I call the doctor"

what a powerful chapter, I read holding my breath. but Stannis' obsession with the "Iron Throne" is disturbing to me. It was the same in the canon and it did not bring him to good

if the Martell branch with dragons moved to Essos, then such a war might not happen

not a fan of warhamer40k, I hope this novel will not be as gloomy as 40k...

I hope he doesn't leave her in the village, that would be very irresponsible I also hope that this story doesn't turn into a story about Buggy's child who will be Luffy's rival or comrade.

Lately I don't understand what's going on. All these time gaps confused me. is it so hard to keep a linear narrative? the auction has already passed and it’s not at all interesting how booze Sandor during it and what conversations were held four weeks before the auction. The last 5 chapters are solid water, which only confuses. I also noticed that the spelling sank

1 - Azula. What is "Book Two: Earth"?

I meant that he would defeat the chunin. But not a jonin

...I'm shocked. The fact that MS OP, I understand. For him, defeating a chunin is an easy task. But Sakumo just graduated from the academy, and to defeat a jonin... It's unlikely that a chunin could have been cut down, but I think that's all.

the situation looks a bit ridiculous. Where are the ninja protectors of the caravan? Does the author really think that it is possible to walk from Konoha to Uzumaki Village in a day?

I'm wondering if Nick Fury is African American? It's just that in the comics, before the first Avengers show, he was white.

one bulletproof vest and this would not have happened. now there are a lot of vests that can be worn under clothes and will not be noticeable at all

I did not know that in America such a thing as disconnecting from the Internet is practiced.

No one was embarrassed by the fact that the report has been conducted since the Nativity of Christ?

the author publishes 30 chapters ahead on his patreon.

I wanted to write "How to get that Andrew won, not Toby?" But I remembered that the author writes in advance on patreon.I wanted to write "How to get that Andrew won, not Toby?" But I remembered that the author writes in advance on patreon.

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I hope that the story does not slide into a Chinese novella. Oh, I hope the hero grows up and gains confidence)))