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RuinedWorld

RuinedWorld

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2020-09-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld1yr
    Commented

    so definitely space out more. like use two spaces or one i dont remember anymore after two sentences or full stops. Also, use commas and other punctuations instead of constantly using fullstops. good luck

    Ch 1 Death Call
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    Child Of War And Death
    Fantasy · JN_Njane
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    first

    Ch 257 Sunken Ripple of Rupture
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    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    i wonder if that dude is the protagonist of another book of yours? considering how they talk bout his unique ways, i find him a hard but very interesting character to write

    Ch 248 Binary Thinking
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    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    I'm glad you're back :)

    Ch 24 The one who has no equal
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    Titanomachy
    Action · As2o3
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    maybe show how his awkwardness in social situations in the future to develope his character

    Amun Ashraf was one of the very few people who were coincidentally named as the Gods they awakened to be. He was tall and had a dark complexion with short curly hair. He liked privacy and lacked common social skills.
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    Titanomachy
    Action · As2o3
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    is this dropped then

    Ch 18 Sick fuck!
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    My Slaughter System
    Sci-fi · Cloudthief
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Replied to CaptainBoyHole

    honestly

    By using the movements within the practice text, people became capable of storing what came to be known as sword breath into their bodies, allowing them to display great prowess as long as they wielded a sword, and before anyone knew it the world had already changed…
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    Only I Am A Reader
    Fantasy · LightningAsura
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    very interesting

    Ch 3 Hearing Voices? Initiating Trial!
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    Only I Am A Reader
    Fantasy · LightningAsura
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 119 Crystalline
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    this chapter definitely needed some hype music

    Ch 109 Devil
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Replied to MagnuS

    i didn’t. Care to explain?

    "{The Sage of the Crystal Mountain,}" Fray said seriously. "{It is an anecdote. Or, I believed it was a simple anecdote. It is about a Sage living on top of a mountain made of crystal. The Sage is told to be omniscient and omnipotent.}"
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    The Harvester
    Fantasy · AhraManyu
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    give Ryu two more arms. Problem solved

    Ch 107 Shameless
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    i hope to god Deon doesn’t become a sword wielder

    Ch 47 Monster eggs
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    Death Ascension
    Fantasy · Tiene_Lass
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Replied to Benno

    i wasn’t talking bout the dual wielding aspect? I just liked the fact that the mc chose a weapon which isn’t a sword

    Ch 69 Basic Stances
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    these peasants from the dredges of the universe can’t recognize Mt.Tai

    Ch 100 Killing Intent
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    This chapter is also messed up

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    Heres something wrong with this chapter

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 97 Won't Let Go
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    his spatial qi is pretty cool

    Ch 94 Sweep
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • RuinedWorld
    RuinedWorld2yr
    Commented

    No third chapter?

    Ch 90 Silas
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    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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