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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    You are actually really good at writing fight scenes! One of the qualities of a good fight scene, is minimal decription, which you do perfectly. For all those who do not understand I will explain; a poorly written fight scene tries to explain every detail and not allow the readers mind to work. A good fight scene lets the readers mind fill in the gaps. Keep up the great work Author-sama, and have a nice day!

    Ch 228 [Chapter 226] Blood Spilt Pt 2
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    bongosandpizza1yr
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    I actually laughed when I read that!

    'That punk would be more likely to eat someone whole than to get a girlfriend.' Little did the old man know that he was indeed right in his slandering assertion. Alban's hunger was definitely on a higher priority than getting someone to love him, he was truly feral in that aspect. He wouldn't even understand anything other than friendly or familial affection as a form of endearment.
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    bongosandpizza1yr
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    Heyo job hype! Good chapter Author-sama and hope you have a fantastic day!

    Ch 224 [Chapter 222] Spirit?
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    This book is very good, some reasons why below; 1. The writing quality is very high, and there are little to no grammatical errors in this book 2. The characters are realistic and act in plausible ways 3. The story is good and not forced in any way 4. The MC slowly losing his humanity is done very well 5. Fight scenes are good

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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    Ah, ah! I see you little question mark!

    Race: Human?
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    Yeah let me just do that…

    Cease being a human (0/1)
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Replied to Elyon

    Thanks for the confirmation! Hyped for academy arc (although this arc is really good and I kinda want it to go on longer), and I’m happy that we can meet some friends, both old and new! Have a great day Author-sama!

    Ch 109 Those Who Reside In The Darkness [Part 2]
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    Hope you get the job! Have a great day Author-sama!

    Ch 227 I got an interview so no chapter tonight
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    TLDR at bottom + Question for Author-sama I haven’t written a comment for a little while, so this shall mark my triumphant return! *clears throat* ahem… This chapter uses the classic idea of “The Hero’s Journey” to showcase where this segment is heading. Specifically it is the “Loss of Innocence” step. Normally it is not taken so litterally, however for how our character is and acts, this is good character development. I personally have always been a fan of Assassin Classed people, so this segment may be biased slightly. Ezio is a very interesting character so far, and also sheds a small amount of light on the leader of Lont, Will’s grandfather. I hope that his assassin training goes well, but that his character doesn’t change too much, otherwise I feel that the story will be disrupted. Overall, this has been a great arc, and some great character development. TLDR: Great arc, Great development, and Looking forward to the next chapters Question for Author-sama: Academy arc yes or no? Just want to meet back up with the girls turned boys at the academy, and some stuff to happen. Keep up the great work Author-sama and have a great day!

    Ch 109 Those Who Reside In The Darkness [Part 2]
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Posted

    I have only a few things to say. I had a smile on my face the entire time The characters felt real Its honestly a good story The face slapping is actually good So overall, read this story, you wont regret it

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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Replied to Dragongamer1848

    Dude that cat is CHILLING! Wish I could chill like that.

    Ch 222 [Chapter 220] Goodbye Gifts
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    I like the idea of a split personality that only comes out in combat. The grammer was good and the chapter was great! Keep up the great work Author-sama and have a great day!

    Ch 215 [Chapter 213] Sadistic
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    bongosandpizza1yr
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    Ch 10 Surprise
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    Great work Author-sama! I’ll have to find a use for that quote! 😏

    Ch 213 [Chapter 211] What the…?
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    Thanks for answering my question! Also welcome back! Thanks for the chapter Author-sama and have a great day!

    Ch 215 Q&A 2
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    *cough cough* uh yeah about that...

    Kurayami: Hopefully after the war, but I don't think they have a million soldiers to tenderize.
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Commented

    Great chapter Author-sama, allowing the character to be seen vulnerable will make him feel more close to the readers. Keep up the great work and have a good day!

    Ch 86 The Last Nail In The Coffin
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    Yeahhhhhhhh! Academy/School arc coming up hype! Is it going to be a classic one, or a new one from Author-dono! We’ll know soon! Keep up the great work Author-dono, and have a great day!

    Ch 188 The Ancient Order
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
    Replied to Belatrixjr

    Dang man, that’s a good one, take my like and go!

    Ch 84 Would You Like William To Become Your Exclusive Slave?
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  • bongosandpizza
    bongosandpizza1yr
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    Well, I wonder whats going to happen next? It seems that we are changing arcs over to training maybe? I hope that he can learn from his mistakes in the duel and improve himself. If he stays as weak and unintelligent as he is now, he will probably die, or people around him will. I’m looking forward to some character development for him, and I hope we still hang out with Est for a while. Keep up the great work Author-dono, and have a great day!

    Ch 84 Would You Like William To Become Your Exclusive Slave?
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