Nancy_Johnson_7728
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Just a casual reader that happened across the site on FB and couldn’t resist.
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Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented“What would you say, if I said yes?”
"What would say if I said yes?"- Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommentedCh 59 Chapter 59
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Escapde not escapee
As if he had read her mind, she heard Damien warn her, "Don't even think about it," and her eyes moved to look at him. Taking a much more casual stance, he said, "It will take me less than ten seconds to snap both their heads in front of you if you plan to involve them in this little escapee of yours. Think carefully, mouse. Your one wrong move towards me will lead to two deaths. Correction," he raised his hand, "Three. Forgot about that one," he turned to look at the old man over his shoulder. - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented
I’m enjoying the story but it really needs breaks between switching characters.
Lucian watched the castle, where he used to live, where he had grown up, from a mountain far away. The castle where heavily guarded. Every gate, every corner, every door were guarded by soldiers with weapons. It would be impossible to enter and kill his brother unless his brother decided to come out. - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented
*Shock sounds better then shook.
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Strange response, Noah is very indifferent overall, why would this particularly scare him?
Noah gulped a bit, the cliff had become incredibly scary in his eyes. - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented
Shouldn’t it be master heir instead of mister? Seems like mister would not exactly be a term they’d use in that world.
"Can I help you with something, mister heir?" - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrReplied to Nayrod
I lol’ed a bit too much, good comment 😂!
'This thing is amazing! There is no way that I give it back. If I just hide it under my clothes, no one would be able to find it!' - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented
The whole section is very confusing, how the family works is not being explained very well. No offense meant.
'Hehehe, from his sister-in-law to his younger sister. Isn't the seniority in this family becoming too complicated? - Nancy_Johnson_77283yrCommented
Enjoying this story
Waiting for the kiss he only felt her stiff fingers on his lips. What was she doing? Then he heard a small gasp before she pulled her finger away.