I enjoy this story but waiting this long for one chapter is seriously getting on my nerves. I'm paying a lot of money for minimal reward. It's not just this story either. I'm almost ready to F it and delete my account.

This is seriously the best cliffhanger of the whole entire series! I'm dying!

This just getting ridiculous! It shouldn't take this long.

I am loving this story and can't wait to read the rest but now that I'm caught up and have to wait for the chapters to be uploaded I'm starting to get annoyed. Waiting days for them and then only getting one at a time is ridiculous. I understand the authors are amateurs and I'm all for supporting up and coming artists however I don't want to spend more than necessary for a story.

As soon as I read she was ill, I knew she was pregnant. This is exciting!

I'm not going to ask any questions because I know I'll find out how Abi is still alive in the next chapter. I was holding my breath without realizing it reading this chapter. Thank you for posting 2 chapters because if you had left us after the first one I would've screamed in agony.😉

Aaaaaaaaa!!! The suspense is killing me! This has to be the end; Abi and Alex pushing the blade in together? There is no way she could survive that.

The intensity of this fight is so strong! Fighting someone who has such anger and hate is relentless and unforgiving. Hang in there Alex, keep Abi safe and it'll be over soon. Zeke.......Zeke, Zeke, Zeke! Thank you for showing up, man, but what took you so freaking long? You better have a good reason why it had to be when everyone is trapped and about to be burned to death before you reach out to help. Im really interested in hearing this one. I haven't been this addicted to a story since Harry Potter. I also really appreciate being able to discuss it and share theories with all of you. It adds to the experience. Thank you!💜

When you're intensely reading and it ends suddenly, its a jolt back to reality and you realize you've been holding your breath. Please, please, let them be ok! They can't lose the new witch queen so soon. She has to survive! And......where is Zeke? He didn't seem to be in the abyss where he had fallen before? Had he been able to get put without being seen? Is he going to save the day and earn back everyone's trust?Ahhh! Inquiring minds want to know!😉. Knowing the end is coming makes my anticipation stronger. Keep up the good work, Kazzen!💜

I don't think that'll be the end of it though. I'm thinking Abi is going to have to pierce the heart. Damage to the eye will give Abi an advantage. I'm wondering if all the Vampires can attack to provide enough diversion for Abi and Alex to get close for the final blow. I think it was Zeres that fell into the abyss. He was the only thing big enough for everyone to notice out of the corner of their eye like that. I hope he survives and allows Abi to drink his blood so she may become immortal too. It looks like Zeke knew Dinah would turn into a dragon and played her perfectly.

Hahahaha! The wicked witch is finally getting what she deserves! Die, Dinah, Die! Now that she's dead, whats going to happen to her followers? Itll be interesting to see. I hope Abi is able to gain Zeres' trust and he can live in peace.

How do you refresh the chapter? I'm seeing anything to tell me. Thanks!

Kazzen, Do what you need to do to take care of yourself. You can't pour from an empty cup.. Eat healthy, sleep, meditate/pray, laugh with friends and family. We may anticipate the next chapter but, and I think I can speak for us, we'd much prefer a healthy human. We will survive one chapter a day; in the end you have to live with you and your mental health is of the utmost importance. Thank you for writing an amazing story and please take care of yourself. 💜

How horrible! Hopefully this information will help them figure out Dinah's weaknesses and develop a good plan to defeat her. Aaaannnnddd, I really hope Zeke is playing the mole that will end her reign from the inside.🤞

Oh I'm here alright! We're finally getting to the part(s) I've been waiting for. This is so exciting!

Yes, you're right! He may think he's married to Dinah because they woke up together and now they're separated. Or, with her evil ways, convinced him he was married to Abi to enrage jealousy and revenge. Ooooo, I'm excited!

Ummm, say what now? Wife? He must be remembering wrong; he may think she was his wife because he loved her so much but cannot remember. Hopefully Alicia will show him the truth and he'll be willing to accept it. Let's wait and see, shall we 😊

I hope Zeres is cool and wants to help Abi as he did save Alex's life however, I'm sure there is still anger from his Mom betraying him. We'll have to wait and see!😫🤪😂🥰💜

They were hidden in a cave or something. It's fantasy....we gotta go with it 🤷‍♀️😊

Hi. The last paragraph of the last chapter says that Abigail was born and at the same moment 2 people in a cave moved and opened their eyes. I think that is when they woke and started hashing out their plan.