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Is the author 10 years old? Characters acting immature, capital letters everywhere, plot points that make no sense (why does she need to be transmigrated? Why give her an old dress when you're trying to show her off? Why make her attend if she might collapse and embarrass you?). Just 'the author got an idea and never thought about any of it'.
Very cliche face-slapping novel with a Mary Sue lead, but some very distracting errors. Chapters 6 and 7 are the wrong novel.
Well, she's useless as a parent, isn't she? Doesn't even try to explain anything or talk to the children. It's the 4th day and she hasn't fed or washed them once. They'd be better off raised by wolves.
They're all sleeping together on the floor because they think there was an argument upstairs. These people are insane.
100 boxes of fresh milk? That's... dumb.
That might be the stupidest thing I've read today. Armies for everyone, nothing can possibly go wrong here!
Written like a baby book: "There was a dog. The dog was named Spot. Spot liked to run." Names mixed up, too.