Better writing than most works I've seen on this site. However, the author did use a comma instead of a semicolon. I'm a big semicolon fan; I feel gypped.
Beams of sunlight shone through the mottled shade, tiny dust particles seemed illusory and unreal under the rays of the sun, adding touches of immortality in the vast forest.
I like the interesting blend this story shows between human and animal society. Parker is a big sweetheart of a kitty too. I'm not up to date but I hope Qingqing stays with him.
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