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Travis_Beecher2yrCommentedCh 1085 The glowing eyes- Travis_Beecher3yrCommented
*, they would be the center of attention and an even bigger target.
She knew that they would probably be targeted by a few people here and there but she was hoping that Xander's past deeds and strength would deter most of those away. She never thought the descendants would be attending the same school. Even Xander with his skill stood no chance. Now with Erin winding up the descendants, there would be the centre of attention and a bigger target. - Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 681 Strong hunting grounds
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well done. these few chapter(608ish-612ish) felt a little rushed. the scene where Quinn walks out after waking up, etc. don't rush out material if you're not feeling it. overall though, pacing is well and finishing up 615, I feel comfortable you know where the story is heading. keep up the great work.
Ch 615 Finally a reply - Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 606 Debt paid
- Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 587 Don't attack the Blade family
- Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 582 Punches and kicks
- Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 574 A different solution
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well. time to take care of kazz. also, she HAS to realize at this point she can't take on the entire team. wouldn't she have some sense of self preservation? knowing these actions would anger the team, you'd think she'd have some kind of plan to handle them since she can't fight them all off. interesting to see what she comes up with
Ch 573 Everything we have! - Travis_Beecher3yrCommented
* to reveal her*
Springing into action, Linda took off her clothes to review her beautiful white and gold armour underneath. She was wearing the best gear she owned, and she was ready to go into battle. Her two daggers were drawn held up in front of her. - Travis_Beecher3yrCommentedCh 568 Poor Leadership