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I really like the theme how the writer is able the relate different world and keep the mystery going. I hope to see more surprises as the new characters come. It would be interesting to see how all the families are going to come together as a powerful harem forces and how the writer intricate magic, eroticism and adventure together. I WOULD LIKE TO SEE EACH CHAPTER FILLED WITH MORE HANGER THOUGH SOMETIMES IT FAILS TO DO THAT.

Besides I have given you 5 stars yesterday; if that's what demand out of me. shouldnot you be fo

I think you must focus on your work rather than approval from outside. To gain one true fan (appreciator of work without demanding ) is more worth than trillions of negative comments or fan that demands. As per you free post; sorry you feel like i have demanded much from you, regardless you are always free to do what you like. Besides your writing also needs good appreciation to blossom otherwise what's the point of sharing or writing. About the free stuff, if you could take cash from me i would like to join $3/month subscription for at least a month . but I don't have any credit cards ( bad credit and gave up on making new ones) or pay pal. Besides you should focus on your work that validation or demand excessive ownership of your work . Yes you are right, you could say ; this is my work why should i share one single chapter to anybody or you could say ,despite all the negative comments ,why should not i share freely as much as i could for the world to see how my work . The choice is always yours ; you either share or not share ; there is no trying, there's only action.

thank you for reply. I hope you get your badge . Thank you for the stories updates . I hope you write more similar stories on similar theme as ****** and magic

you threaten me, if i wasn't excited about the novel i would not bother to review you as i have not and i don't read any stories but knight lust in this website. i login at least once a day sometimes more to check update even i know the update has not been there. I went to patron several time and find unfortunate could not join because i don't have bank account( bad credit), credit card but cash and no PayPal. Because i am excited about how stories will turnout, I go to patron just to check small excerpt you post. I am a great fan of ****** novel and read many novels from literotica to other websites and only come up with few interesting writers and stories; (Afflicted, trapped in a game, geran and nicole, the rouge harem and lust knight). i am sorry you felt bad I will redo my review but there's no need to threaten me.