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The best trailer in the world—I can't wait to see what happens.

This is one of the best *Total Drama* fanfics I’ve ever read. Please don’t stop until you’ve covered every season—including *The Ridonculous Race* and the spin-offs; this fanfic deserves it. (I don’t mean you should make a spin-off *of* this fanfic, but rather that you should include the actual *Total Drama* spin-offs within the story.) Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter, though I feel like they’re getting shorter. I know I’m asking a lot, since writing takes so much effort (creativity, time, steering the story without ruining it, etc.), but I’d love a longer chapter—one that leaves me eagerly awaiting the next, feeling like a fresh start rather than just part 2 or 3 of a single chapter. Thanks again for the chapter; keep it up—despite everything, you have loyal readers.

A third option is for him to have two wives: one a Targaryen brought from the past (specifically, one who is not and has never been married within the history of Westeros or the *Game of Thrones*/*A Song of Ice and Fire* universe), and the other from his own time. I vote for Cersei; I would like to see how she would act with a partner or husband who actually loves or respects her.

Thanks for the chapter. I have a question: Did Peggy Carter become immortal, or was she just made young again?. I hope she's just young again because the protagonist can't just be giving away immortality to anyone (no offense to Peggy). I say this because the protagonist doesn't seem like the type of person to give away youth, maybe, but immortality to people outside his summons, unless they're important to him or one of his future partners outside his circle (summons), I don't see it happening. But I believe in you, author. I like how you've taken the story, and even though there are a few things that are a bit stylized, it has its own unique style. It's clearly from someone who really puts effort into their story/fanfic, and that's what makes it so captivating. I look forward to new chapters. Thanks again for the chapter, and I sincerely hope you don't abandon the story and that you don't stop writing.

I like the story; it's clear you put effort into translating it and correcting the occasional mistake. Even so, I'd still like to know the raw version or the original title of the story/fanfic.

The film is Look Away, not Mirrors, that's a different film.

It's great that Xenovia is joining, but I'd also like to see Irina included, but only if the pawns mutate so there are more Servants. I also like Makima as a Queen. But above all, thank you for the chapter. Keep writing; you have our full support.

Take care and get well soon