nooo, moreeee

I still remember this detail from DC when he . mentioned his first love was a general which sadly......

the writing okay ish but the pace is horrendous, and so is the premise, the positive comments must be blind.

no chappy?

no chappy?

it's been so long since I have read this again, maybe 1 or 2 years

I actually prefer you make a new one, this one died or the hype and excitement died, this was actually super good but, should I reread it? no, I already know what happened so it's not that good no more, would the story become even better in the future? maybe, but in circumstances that your work does not get its support that it once was, it's unmotivating right? I feel for the author

I had a stroke reading this, thanks anyways

anybody know where the next chapter button is at?😭

The development is top notch, it's not too fast nor slow, I've read through the latest chapters and the grammar is goodthe The Oc is well developed and the right screen time for GM. Imo it could use a little more Detail on the Moves, but that's just me.I really hope this Stays, There is a Curse which is true , all KNB fanfics stop midway and leave us hanging. Good luck author

Im glad. if it's someone else mother good. if its own ...... eh that's very bad

welp, this is depressing

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is their romance?

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Too much talking😂

D . Protag without superpowers but has pro experience in BB

I had a stroke reading thanks! I give you 1 Ps