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Nomura. Anime and yaoi freak. DC and Marvel slave. Metal head.

2020-09-10 JoinedNigeria
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden1mth
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    This is nice. Although, the writing needs a little work and some editing here and there. Other than that, this book is great. The synopsis introduced the characters well and the first chapter is perfect. Nice work author san

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden1mth
    Commented

    First great chapter hun

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden1mth
    Commented

    Drunk, yet manipulative AF

    " Please? You really want to leave a young woman, who by the way is really drunk alone with a man who could secretly be a kidnapper. " I tilted my head to the side to add to my dramatic act.
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden1mth
    Commented

    My mind immediately went to Dr. Strange馃槀

    "Thank you very much, Mr. Strange."
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden1mth
    Commented

    lolll

    "My Sister, hiccup, said I shouldn't go with strange men, and you Mister are very very strange. But I trust you, so bring, hiccup, taxi, hiccup, me."
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    Hey minna san! This is a shameless review lol. Anyways, this book is edited by me, so I apologize if some errors are in there and make you cringe lol. I'll be looking through it once in a while and edit the chapters. The tags for this books are: Fantasy, Mythology, Action, Romance (for a short while lol), Magical System, Blood, Gore, War, Military, Betrayal, Gods & Goddesses, Monsters, Death, Martial Arts, Big Women, Dark Skin Characters, LGBTQIA, Heiress Protagonist, Strong Female Characters, Strong Male Characters. Have a great read everyone~馃 And pls, leave a honestly review lol. Also, I have another book here by the title PUER MORTIS (Child of Death). Please give it a try馃榿馃榿

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    The synopsis is the first thing that drew me in. It goes straight to the point and tells the reader whats to come without giving out much details. The book itself is a new kind of experiment with a mix of old elements. Nice work author san

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    The book has a nice plot. First chapter really captivated me. You could feel the emotions from the characters 馃槪馃槪Great work author san!馃憤馃憤

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    The last leaf on the tree
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    Amazing! This book is great! The words flow with the characters. If you love romance, this is truly a book to feast your eyes upon. Great job author san!馃榿馃榿馃榿馃榿馃榿馃榿

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    A love called hatred
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
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    Only the opening sequence blew me away! God damn! Its short in chapter but still managed to give out a great storyline. Well done author san! You really outdid yourself

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
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    I'm already loving this 馃ぉ馃ぉ

    It was the summer of 1882. The sun shedded light upon the interior of the Blightworth Hospital. For some patients within the hospital, it burned their eyes.
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    I love the poetic and psychology feel to this. Although I'm not a religious person, it still resounds in me. Great job author! 10/10. Keep up the good work馃榿馃榿

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    THE MISSING ORB OF LIFE
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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
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    Author here~ This is a shameless review lol. Thank you for giving this book a shot馃槆馃槆 The Tag List of this book are: Fantasy, Scifi, Paranormal, Action, Adventure, Psychology, Magik, Part time Female-CEO, Ex-Assassin Protagonist, Assassin Clan, Hitmen, Futuristic Earth, Set in the 22nd Century, Post World War 3, Advance Technology, Supernatural Creatures, Daemons, Angels, Vampires, Werewolves, Kitsunes, LGBTQIA Characters, Black Female Protagonist, Black Male Lead, Strong & Powerful Characters, Death, Gore, and Blood. There might be Romance, but for now the book has to progress first. As this book is divided into 3 volumes, the chapters will be 200+. Please like this review so that others can see the tags!馃グ馃グ馃グ

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    This story is a new experience, ngl. It has a drama approach feel, and although the writer is new to this, they are quite imaginative. My only problem is that since it uses a drama approach it gets confusing. All in all, its a nice approach to fiction. Kudos to the author!!

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
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    Love this! Mafia AU is my thing. Although nit a romance fan, I still find it entertaining馃槍馃槍 10/10. Although, there are few errors here and there, as well as gaps in paragraphs, but its nothing too much. Great work author!馃グ馃ぉ

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Replied to PeNNWilaZ_PlayZ

    like I said, the story is great AF. Keep up the good work!馃榿馃榿

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
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    This is great! Although I rarely read military works, this drew me in lol. The issue with this is the punctuations and spacing. Like I said in chapter one, u don't put full stops were they are meant to be and the same could be said for the commas. Also, try paragraphing your works. Sometimes, a long paragraph just distracts the reader and makes them lost. All in all, this is a great novel馃グ

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Commented

    Great first chapter! Very detailed too. Although, there are some places where u r meant to put fullstops instead to commas, and places where u should have put commas

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Replied to Loliput

    dude 馃槀馃槀 no馃ぃ

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  • Enma_Eden
    Enma_Eden2mth
    Posted

    Nice story hun! I love a girl who doesn't take shot from anyone. Although the language and writing style confuses me, it's still a great story. Nice work author san馃榿馃榿

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