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this guy Aron is simply destroying the lives of millions.He made the entire mobile manufacturing industry and heavy machinery industry useless with atomic printers. software developer are useless too with his AI. He simply made millions of people jobless.He had invaded the people's privacy with these targeted ads, he knows everything about the people, he's more like a super villain than an MC.
lemme give you my opinion.The first few chaps are illogical. You mentioned he used Plagiarism software, all the software will have a files stored after checking the paper, so he can show it and prove it. Next, all universities will require a Turnitin report before submitting their thesis, so another blunder. If the paper is plagiarized, and the author didn't know that and even the software didn't know it, it's not his mistake at all. The case would be immediately won in court.Next, what kind of logic is hiring two passed out students as CEOs for a multibillion corporation I get it that they are his friends and trusted but it's still not logical for me. Next, in one of the chapters, mc explains everything to his friends, so is it even required to be that detailed ? You can just write it as, the mc explained everything to his friends but omitted this and this part and altered his story here a bit and be done with it. The way you described everything is not quality writing, it's like you wanna fill up some chapter pages. I do get it that you are new writer, but I hope you won't make such mistakes in the future. Honestly, compared to the first few chaps, the improvement in your writing can be seen clearly.