Relief. That made me feel relief

What about the protag onist plot armor? That shields from all damage for an hour. Seems like you have forgotten about it

This story has been quite the amazing journey, from the beginning to end it has been nothing more than a thrilling adve nture, thank you so much for this!

These chapters are way to short, also putting the bits of the ending part where you say to reach out is getting annoying at this point as it seems you are using it to fill up more words. Great read though

Brother good work, but really lets focus on theses typos and missing words. It’s starting to irk me. Literally, every single chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon