Ocean_Heph

This is just what I think of the first chapter but isi don’t take it to heart

Th first chapter was good but I feel like you could work on the flow of it more felt a bit choppy to read otherwise great work

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chap

Thanks for the chap

That was a rollercoaster but why gruff why

F

Dang the chef felt that insult

What show is this