Perseus_Peverell

I think the first chapter was unbbelievable then this is totally even more. You don't haggle with the CEO of the biggest club in the world. Not even if you are CR7 or Messi, Pogba was let go for a similar reason.

Where is the consistency. He had 26 assists a few rounds back, even Fabregas was lamenting the difference/

I agree and I think going to United with Ferguson there would actually help, and I think the year is 2009 or 10 right so he still has 3-4 seasons left at the top. I think the deal structure could be to sign with Utd, but joining them at the end of the current season.

Story was well developed and going good until chapter 165, where instead of movving away from Aizen, he went to work for him and that to after consultation with Urahara, who he himself doesnot trust. Just lost interest, I had some issues before like totally forgetting Nanao, who was his best friend. Forgot about Kaien, then Soifon. Dude just moves! But was fairly enjoyable until the Aizen move.

You don't need to add my mom, my dad evrywhere.

I think this one is the most useless inheritance. Sage mode is cleaner, cursed seals just corrodes your chakra and makes you ugly!

Why is he suddenly 10, shouldn't he be closer to 15 if Naruto, and Sasuke are 12 rt now/

Root ninja are tools, then why are they so emotional? This is a cliche which is really annoying. Danzo is not foolish enough to mess around inside the village and the Root ninjas are cold killers with no personality, they would not get angry or roar at people. The story so far has been really good, no need to keep bringing in Danzo when he really doesnot work this way.

This is very true, every chapter has a paragraph explaining his lack of magic and Yuno's talent and then he defeats both Yuno and Asta. This is getting kinda irritating.