Perseus_Peverell

A EMS knock off or a artifact buff preventing Doujutsu deterioration

Why is the academy classroom stale and sterile, is it a hospital? Don't use descriptors or adjectives unnecessarily. Breaks immersion and is a turn off.

isn't sasuke getting beaten up too much?

I am a big fan of HTSU, the lore and story progression is amazing there, hope this fic does the same. Muso and masashi are amazingly written characters with multiple layers and believable flaws.

muzo really?

This is amazing, this is what I was waiting for. All that maneuvering by Tobirama, just to fall deeply into a trap.

What is the age difference between him and Kakashi and why is he in the same class as Obito, Rin, etc if he is older than Kakashi?

The sensei's character is too cold and blunt. But good story overall

Commenting at the end, probably one of the most relaxing stories I have read.

Sasori's parents, not Deidara's.