Passing_Rain42

Usually I am not a huge fan of this type of story but I am enjoying it nonetheless. The World is interesting and pretty funny. Love it so far keep it up!

Story has a lot of good elements here and there that set it apart from the average dark fairy tale retelling you generally get with these type of 'edgy' re imaginings. Good start so far besides maybe a few pacing issues early on that kinda made the action hard to read. but otherwise enjoyable as a whole so far!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola