Joswilaney
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Joswilaney6 months agoReplied to DylanUhhread a real book, by Tolkien, Jordan, or Goodkind... learn what appropriate levels of detail looks like
- Joswilaney6 months agoReplied to Jorah26252
it's called 'plot armor hamfists a 180⁰ shift in MC's mentality and attitude' which is just lazy writing
- Joswilaney6 months agoReplied to DylanUhh
it's Not logic.... it's emotion. duh
- Joswilaney6 months agoReplied to
it's called plot armor explains sudden & inorganic 180⁰ shift in MC's mentality and attitude....#lazywriting , he didn't need to suddenly be so on board with everything. makes him come across as naive and gullible
- Joswilaney6 months agoReplied to Raion_Heart
my comment was Very sarcastic
- Joswilaney6 months agoCommented
So we never find out what was in his inventory for quest reward for banging the 2 maids?
- Joswilaney8 months agoCommented
So they're not even Trying to keep his identity secret anymore? What happened to calling him Chris, like they're contact says?
- Joswilaney9 months agoCommented
Doesn't this mean she's breaking her contract??
- Joswilaney9 months agoCommented
At least this chapter was half-full....
- Joswilaney9 months agoCommented
"Where their combined might is exponential, instead of cumulative*" That's what you were trying to say.