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PercikJ3yrPostedThis is my first time reading a novel and i can say that I'm not disappointed by this!! I've read many manga and comics but i never expected to read a storyline like this one!! It's fairly unique and "different" from your normal fantasy storytelling even though i never read novel before. I would definitely recommend this novel to my friends and family. Anyways, stay healthy and keep up the good work Author!!
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" She could easily control"
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"I want to eliminate her"
"I really wish to eliminate her. Can you do it for me?" - PercikJ3yrCommented
"The team wasn't allowed to make any mistakes during the operation"
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Baiknya di line terakhir "So they stop changing hospital because of it"(it refers to Jeffrey's illness that got worse)
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Yang bener "Jeffrey was excited as he smiled from ear to ear"
Jeffrey excited as he smiled from ear to ear. Before he could browse more, someone knocked on the door. - PercikJ3yrCommented
Ini yang bener "Jeffrey was amazed"
"Wow, let me try it." Jeffrey amazed at the new notification windows, so he said, "Status." - PercikJ3yrCommented
Yang bener "He thought that the next thing he should do is to ask Page."
He thought that the next thing he should do to ask Page. However, a notification window came out. - PercikJ3yrCommented
Yang bener "He decided not to use it"
He decided to not used it after he got three points for the sake of satisfaction. He felt a lot more satisfied when he got a lot of points and could use it anywhere he wants, just like now.