The last few chapters have been great.

These author’s notes sound phony.

Now that was a good chapter!

I thought a friend and then a sister was writing?

Here doing what?

I sure don’t need anymore reminders to not jump to conclusions. Let readers imagine and predict what they want.

Love this book and the sequal!

You know pregnant women can have ***, right?

Great book.

Boring

This story line is dragging on and on and on.

Bring back Chichii.

Bring back ChiChii.

What happened to the author?

So, the author was seemingly kicked off the book and MysticAmy has taken over.

When will I be able to read the next chapters?

Ugh, this went in a strange direction. And not in a good way.

Heaven didnt even tell Zamiel she was breaking their plans. That was skipped over. I don’t think she would just stand him up.

Yes, all the time spent writing the end of chapter notes could be redirected to another chapter.

Still can’t get to the next chapter.