I have posted these same works on other sites and they have done VERY well and gotten lots of great reviews and praise so I have no need to follow your "advice." In fact, most people that have reviewed them elsewhere have thanked me for writing something that is well written and intelligent. My advice to you is to find something better to do with your life than being a troll. Trolls do what they do because their own lives are sad and miserable so they feel they must try to bring others down as well so I do feel bad for you and hope you can find something more constructive and positive to do with your life. Perhaps if you would try your hand at writing something of your own....it would also improve your English skills.

Just another internet troll like thousands of others that have such sad lives they have nothing better to do. *yawn*

Fanfiction doesn't have to be "dumb" and readers of fanfiction aren't all "dumb" either. I'm sorry you have such a low opinion of yourself and that causes you to be so unpleasant to others.

Perhaps you should go back to reading Dr. Seuss, something more in line with your reading level and comprehension skills. If you don't understand that these particular characters speak in that manner, then you are not familiar enough with the characters to be reading a story about them.

"Fancy" English is how these characters speak. Judging from the quality of your writing in your comment, it would be a great idea for myself and any writer to ignore anything you have to say on the subject of quality writing. I think you are quite correct....you are dumb.

I've had this story posted on a couple other sites and you're the first person that has recognized the reference. I am doing something a little different with the character as they often do in the MCU...amalgamating different characters into one, etc...but I don't want to give it away.