Avan, so far this story is brilliant and I’m sure either way you take it we will all love it, but I’ll add my two cents. Emerys story has been one of tragedy. For every win he has had he has had almost double the losses, but it serves his character Arc well. He started off as naive and gullible. Has been beaten and trodden on, taken advantage of and betrayed. He’s had to learn to be calm under pressure, adaptable , cunning and strategical to get where he is now. He has grown so much, and we have loved watching home grow. And we will love to continue to watch him grown and hopefully in the art of fatherhood as well. In my opinion, once he does find out Shanta is his daughter he will want to do everything he can to mentor her. It will mirror his journey in a way where he had no one to guide him till lord izta came around and acted like a father figure to him and his group. I hated what you did with the Silva arc. not because it was a bad choice but because I loved Silva as a character. Story wise it was perfect. It added to emerys depth as a character and advanced the story in a great way. But I think Emery needs a win here. I think he should get the joy of having his relationship with Shinta flourish. It will give him more to strive for and more to loose. Part of this is because selfishly I want to see Emery happy and the other part it will add to the story in so many ways. It will open up possibilities to explore Emerys relationship with the Oroboris family. It can either turn in to him helping the Queen with her issue with the Emperor and make them the earths faction Allies or can strain it more and make them more of an enemy. It’s opens up avenues for the Nephilim to try to go after Shinta to get to Emery. Not only could Emery help Shinta with her bloodline and controlling her wolf side, but Also set up to have Emery advance his Bloodline with insights from Shinta’s or help with his grand Magus breakthrough. Also since they both have the same elemental affinities , I think Emery can train her to be one of the top acolytes in the academy, not to mention he possibly as a Chaos champion (or whatever it is called that Chumo is) I know it’s kind of ranty, but this is how I feel will add to the story the most, but obviously you know much better the direction it should go in. Also, the Story is about Emery, and Shinta will have her part to play, but isn’t the MC. But given her context I know she will greatly affect the story. Whatever you choose I know it will be best , and thanks for such a great story so far!

3000 chapters !!! It means we’re half done right?

Elyon, so this is what you meant when you told me you were making an Avengers style team. I can’t wait!

I always felt like he included all of Ista’s wives as an illusion to what emery will have in the future. He mirrors Ista a little bit in his drive and he is currently seeing all of the benefits of having people that close to you that you can trust. I’m hoping for the Harem! Not because it’s cliche but because he has developed all of the characters so well that I can’t help but root for all of them.

Wow, I can’t believe we’re only 1/5 done with this book 😄

Morgana is probably there, and going to tear them up.

I love and hate all your stories Elyon. I love how well they are written and the story building you do. And I hate when they end. You do a great job of finishing up the stories and not dragging them out for thousands of chapters (all though I know none of us would complain if you did) I know they need to end, I’m just never ready for when they do. I love all the cameos and crossovers from other stories you do as well. Seeing James help Lux was a great addition. Do you have any plans on doing a story with multiple main characters of your previous stories in it? Or will we see more of Lux (and William ) in your future projects?

Is this pre William vons Aimsworth K city , pre-post battle K city, or After William’s marriage K city?

Is that where each different version of Bai Zamin and friends come from?

Can we get lux doing another skeleton generator and getting another powerful subordinate? Maybe asking all the kingdoms to donate to the caldron to make a powerful protector? Are we going to see Lux or his current summons smash through a stockpile of beast cores for a last minute power up?

Add her to the mix!

Ok, but 21 years is still. It that long. Would only put him mentally ( or actuall life lived ) in his 40’s. I agree he deserves his rest, but he could rest and still not go in to slumber. I know he loved Layla, but doesn’t he love Minnie and Galen as well. He’s willing and ok with not watching them grow up and have families, or be successful , or protect them if any other threat comes. To me, (and I may be wrong) it doesn’t fit his personality.

I love your works JKS but this felt so rushed. I get that you have other things planned for Quinn, but really only 15 years? So minus the 1000 years he was sleeping, it would mean he’s really only lived to like 35 years old or so. Doesn’t seem right (or make sense) that someone so young wouldn’t want to or get to live more life. He doesn’t want to watch his children grow up? Or help Galen through his journey as a celestial? How can he abandon his children / (future grandchildren ) and not be there or support or help protect them, even for just a normal amount of life span? It just doesn’t fit his character. What about all the other loose ends/ other characters ? No closure on anything? You did my boy Fex dirty, what about his son? Feels like MDS all over again. Please don’t rush the ending of MWS, Gary is such a good character.

Realistically, couldn’t he just consume beast cores to artificially raise his rank? This would not only raise all his summons and covenants power but would unseal a lot of Avernus’s power as well.

Your enemies bad luck is your good luck.

These little skeletons remind me an awful lot of two familers of another red headed half elf

Ain’t that the truth

Agreed, would pay for more privlaged chapters to read that

Why doesn’ Gapp just become a ranker?