Can you not be so weird

Why are you wasting so much time on a 6 year old timeskip time skip time skip

Mate not gonna like this book is to weird . To overly friendly and soppy

Pathetic

Why would you follow cannon

So instead of taking advantage of the distraction he just stands there and thinks ridiculous

Enough bloody celestial this and celestial that it tiresome

Dude you go on about to much randomness

I think you wasted to much time on these chapters

Why are you always letting Harry act like a busybody

Very good but you need to improve the house a bit bit just focus on training and other selfish ideas

Dude you’ve ruined this making him all chunky with the main cast ffs

Dude why is there always so much bloody information that’s not necessary

Dude spend lest time on him as a kid it sucks

To many jokes be a bit more serious and it would be a good book

This is sh it

The way you write this is to old fashioned

Can you stop making this character so meek it’s annoying

Can you not spend so many chapters on random info dumps, I pay for these chapters hoping for something interesting

Ffs dude stop going on abiut this confusion and just accept it it’s been 5 chapters