Josh_Beer

Greatest I’ve read and that’s out of 100’s

Run died after he gave up his eyes… and obito had no fame at all

Focus less on others and more on the protagonist

Gave this up as soon as he joined luffy

Stop writing about Kenny so much skipped this whole chapter

What type of stupidness is this

Can this not be so cheesy

Ruined it having 2 transmigrations

To soft

You gotta toughen him up a bit dude