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So a Calif hang can't wait
Good chapter will you please do more
Sorry I mind you reading new caprice
good luck ring a new caprice.
mommy malek and women to behold.
So cute sheep girl next can't wait.
And I guess star these don't give up on it!!
To be honest you could have done better the the part of the story does lead to him being I'm being a little bit on that side of things but but you could also make it a lot better than even then He thinks of but You're the story is to have an ending and he must lead to a proper path in truly desires.
I wish the Sun Wu Kung come have some more of element I wanna know more about him what hes Lake what his family is is he a good dad or is he a bad dad Thinks about the war against lasberg In spite of his unpredictable and these he does have something that was the say.
I believe I can do more than just a thumbs up I believe you deserve more credit than you can dessert maybe I'm saying a little too meanish but I don't know how to say the right way or the right way of saying that correctly your story sounds interesting even if it is by video audio Even reading through Even readings for each chapter I always feel like the stories could do more or less but that's just my opinion out of many opinions So don't give up on your work.
Really isn't Make a difference or am I don't know enough to know what is.
I hope it's not that dangerous way there.
I knew it spits personalities disorder