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*started gripping Grant's face
*two days in a row I think
I assume this should be Great Red instead of Ddraig
Wrong name here. It should be the Lai girl
*But she knew
Why do you keep randomly capitalizing stuff like They and Humiliate?
Even Beerus hasn't completely mastered Ultra Instinct and he is the strongest G.O.D. It isn't a requirement to be one, but all of them are training to learn it.
*what I despise
Sasha isn't here rn. That's the reason Rubt didn't mention her. Victor is pretty much also a yandere lol.
Happy Birthday!
I've already read up to chapter 6 on questionable questing and I can assure you that this is a great read, and probably my favorite danmachi fic. The writing is great with little to no grammar issues, but it can be a bit wordy at times. The character relationships feel super wholesome. Fellbane was able to make someone like me, who isn't too fond of Hestia, like her quite a lot in this fic. Freya's yandere-ness is also always a treat to read. The protagonist, Ramiel, seems to be quite likable. He's quite proactive and knows what he wants. The interactions between him and the system are also usually amusing. Of course, there really isn't enough content yet to make an in-depth review, but I think the fic shows a lot of promise, and I'm excited to read more.
*Bai Feng, who hadn't seen his....
Oh it definitely is super unfair if Artoria can't have multiple lovers and Will can, but if I'm reading a harem story I personally read it for wish-fulfillment, to begin with. I don't want him to share his lovers with others even though it's unfair. I said it's like ntr because it kinda falls under netorase. I'm also personally not the biggest fan of yuri so I really don't want it to happen. It seems like we both have different tastes and that's fine. I'm sorry if I came off as passive-aggressive
I really hope this doesn't happen. I don't see why you would even want that to happen. It doesn't even make Rin part of the harem and feels like Will is getting ntr'd.
Author has said that she's gonna be like a sister-figure the whole time