Nice put together however, there is a long room of elaboration if you don't mind. Just a few evasive omissions. Good try.

Blissful read! no grammatical faults. congratulations.. Do check the ending though... May was still in the way so she couldn't have fallen on the ground. #tip

The first paragraph needs a little more stuffing to smooth the transition. There are only 2 words amiss in this chapter. The grammatical expressions needs just a little retake then you are perfect. In all fine pieces.👍

Gutsy synopsis introduction, I must say; but catchy! And well deserved! The progress does justice to the whole however, if not attentive? Will the summarys who intention evade ones understanding. That not withstanding, great synopsis without grammatical flaws which compliment a worthwhile piece of literature. I recommend this book to every person above the parental control lines.

The synopsis tells alot about what to expect but the adrenaline rush the whole work brings it better to dive in personally than just pause at the summary.

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The cover is catchy and the synopsis initially goes well until the later part which becomes a little distracted. The author has review to do but it is a good plot.

You told the truth. I have poetic background in English and can't help it sometimes. LoLs. will endeavor to light it out. thanks💋

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A quality synopsis that makes the journey through the literally piece smooth with correct Grammer as well as error free. This is a go to book if you are a fun of action missed with excitement. Nice work author.🤜🤛

The thickening of the plot as one reads further is alluring. The synopsis give an overview of the whole and does the work good. If I may? I advised the transitions needs a little touch as well as suspense to it and within the main write up. The dialogue is slippery and needs a some pauses too as well as extra emotions to it. That not withstanding, it is a good book.

Looking for a lively kind of easy but fast paced read with excitement? This literature is your one stop option. I recommend this piece regardless of the relationship therein. This is due to my background which frown on the relationship within however there vital information is love! Affection. True feelings are underrated in the world we find our, personally anything that has to with genuity must be appreciated.

They synopsis does not do the exact justice the content deserves. The work itself is a clean piece with no burden to reading. The flow of the dictions are smooth. I would advice a little thickness in the main write up but apart from that this is an intriguing piece I recommend to all.

The suspense added at the end of this chapter? Thumbs up.

The way the description goes, is easy to read. Kuddos!

The introduction to the developments of characters as well as their emergence flows smoothly. The elaboration of the plots are light and alluring even without much suspense in transitions of chapters. The work is a one I would recommend. Good work author.

This is a beautiful piece but I you need to go through for grammatical errors and typos. You good after that.

Simply enjoyable.

There isn't much to say than simply enjoy a wonderful peace of words together.🤗

The flow is on point. It is refreshing.