Hello

Good chapter

You have decent grammar so that’s why you got a 4. You have good updating stability to that’s a 4. You have a ok story development, I would wish if you did more research on bears and animals that you use also more action besides him talking about breeding his army all day. I love the character design it’s great but you could give more detailed information on how they look. Lastly we don’t know much about the world at all. I hope you get more into the world soon.

Thanks

Ok. Cool.

Is it possible for a Eagle or maybe a serpent

Great job...

Great chapter

Having very fun writing this. The more support I get the better I feel to push out more chapters! Please leave a review so I can make the chapters better!

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