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Pete_Nd2b8mthCommentedDidn't Gabriel have the only horse?
She washed her face with the cold water before standing up. She climbed back on her horse and left for the City of Abadon.Â- Pete_Nd2b1yrCommented
Excellent read! Had my imagination all over the place. Thank you for the awesome story, And thank you to the translator. Otherwise I'd have never been able to read this.
[Only I Level Up â Fin.] - Pete_Nd2b1yrCommented
I don't speak a lick of Korean but in all honesty could have possibly left it as Honja and just explained that it meant, monster. It's done in a lot of things especially when using English. "Panera bread", "Black noir". Don't be afraid to force expansions of people's minds.
'Wait, since this is still within the System's influence, should I call them monsters, and not monsters?' (TL: Well, sorry about this line. The author had been using the Hanja word for monsters to describe those found in the regular Gates/dungeons, while using the romanised English word 'monster' to describe those found in instant dungeons. They mean the same thing, obviously, but well, wordplay and all that....) - Pete_Nd2b1yrCommented
I think Quinn could take out a Jedi.
Quinn quickly moved, from one to another, using his new Celestial blood gauntlets to cut through all of the Jedi's attacks. Anything they touched looked like the enemy in front would just disappear, and Quinn was faster than them, and even if he wasn't and they were to touch his deadly claws, they would lose their own limbs. - Pete_Nd2b1yrCommented
if you reincarnate Paul, That would be an unusual twist
"It's us. The person who just saved you was Nate, and this is Peter. And you have seen Minny and me. It's a long story, but we all came to get you. We heard from Paul that you were being married off to the Chained's leader, and that's why we are here." Lucia explained. - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommentedCh 308 Iminent danger (3)
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nope the guildmaster showed up and he's getting three wives now.
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guild leaders already showed up?
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sword? What happened to the hammer the dagger and the glave?
"Deal." Allen said and slashed his sword. - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
Jean?
Several days passed, and then Rosalie began to relax at Aura's house. However, when Aura received a reply from Edward, she got nervous again since Kate was going to leave. - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
wow just lost all sorts of function in those sentences.
Somehow, Billy noticed Lily focusing some mana on the tip of her sword and on her right arm that was pulling the arrow. The whole movie had nee pretty smooth, so Billy knew that she had used a skill that he had mentioned to her. In any case, the fire flew while making high pitching sound even louder than usual and pierce the whole body of the monster. - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
which brings up the point why hasn't even using Zen I thought it gave like 10 points per level of the user?
"Maybe, I should do some shopping tomorrow and see what I can find here," Billy thought. "I am leveling up my skills quite fast, but my mana isn't keeping up with it anymore." - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
You haven't said anything about this until now let's talk about Lily's tattoos. She got a tramp stamp or something?
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unless Camilla was replying to herself I think you meant Anna
"The trip will take place in a month, it isn't tomorrow, you can rest easy," Camilla said. "Regardless, you can give me an answer later." - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
Is he communicating with a Jedi?
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who is Luke?
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He's letting us know who we can blame though...
Many of you might have noticed that the number of typos has gone down and the quality of my writing has improved in recent months. I have my editor, Devils_Advocate, to thank for that. I'm calling him out today to thank him for his work and to congratulate him on his birthday. If you also appreciate his work, consider sending him a small donation through his ko-fi. - Pete_Nd2b2yrReplied to SoloQueen
I like your interpretation. But I slightly disagree. instead of actually having the 400 million galaxies it read more like they'd have the backing of it. when the people of his universe got to that point and had their own galaxies they would also have that 5% backing of his?
The now 8 Billion Galaxies that continued to be forged endlessly as core after core was drained even as I faced opponents within this Construct. - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
love your book. But sorry dude not possible. đ
More beautiful than even a father watching their first child be born! - Pete_Nd2b2yrCommented
All right the chicken can stay.
This was a Trainer! This was an Animus Summoner!