DaoistWill
Reader of multiple translated novels, primarily from WuxiaWorld. ISSTH, Godsfall chronicals, etc. ATM: 10 books finished reading over the years.
of reading
155
Read books
Badges
17Moments
55
DaoistWill10mthReplied to AustinSargentlast chapter it was mentioned it went from 2 to 6
Normally, the 6 skeletons with Fang Yang walked in rows of 3, allowing for some manoeuvrability in their movement, but with Fang Yang's order, the 3 skeletons behind stepped up, perfectly filling the gaps in between them.- DaoistWill11mthCommented
no rizz gang
- Charisma: 0 - DaoistWill1yrCommented
>with a very simple design. was a very simple design Why.
A golden rug runner down from the throne itself, which was an impressive marble throne of pure white stone with a very simple design, was a very simple design. There was the throne of the Empress next to the Emperor's, where Ilroraniel, the wife of the Emperor, was sitting. - DaoistWill1yrCommented
summed up the capitol was majestic and beautiful yes. we get it can we not repeate the same word vomit three times over?
A great deal of charm and majesty could be found in the Imperial Palace of the Nesser Dynasty. The Imperial Palace of the Nesser Dynasty was majestic and breathtaking on its own. The traditional Silvermoon architecture, combined with some bits of utilitarian design, for a better combination with nature itself. It was one of the most impressive and beautiful buildings of the entire Dynasty and the history of the Seldarine species. - DaoistWill1yrCommented
Repeated whether they are mortal, legendary, or transcendant twice here. we got it in the first half of the sentence. There's no need to add in word fluff
It was the World Tree that represented all the Elven species that lived not only on the Tower but throughout the entire Cosmos, and it was the greatest treasure of the Nesser Dynasty. All Seldarine, whether they were ordinary elves or those of the highest and noblest standing, Mortals or Legendaries or even Transcendental, felt a connection to the World Tree, whether they were Mortals, Legends, or even Transcendental. - DaoistWill1yrCommented
what?
Yvraine said, knowing exactly where her ???, really it was tricky, boyfriend?, maybe, wanted to say. Samiel was money grubber as hell, and he knew that Estrid, who was under his command, killed a lot of enemies, she disposed of Draegloths, and he himself killed the Drider and slaughtered thousands of Monstrous Spiders and Ettercaps. - DaoistWill1yrPosted
- DaoistWill1yrCommentedCh 317 Checking Stats
- DaoistWill1yrCommented
✨️foreshadowing✨️
All of the threats that once walked this dimension are long gone. None will come back and that is assured by the fact that the Academy stood tall in this place for almost 3000 years without facing any kind of threat. - DaoistWill1yrCommentedCh 1221 Three Paths
- DaoistWill1yrCommentedCh 85 Feat Of Strength
- DaoistWill1yrCommented
drug -> drag
" I don't drug any attention to myself during the evaluation, so please stay away from me girl, i can't afford to lose and …" - DaoistWill1yrPosted
Writing quality is a solid 4/5, some minor mistakes here and there but overall pretty good story is definitely a 1, after ch50 it gets extra confusing and i have no idea what the story is (at ch80) since its bouncing between what i thought was the MC and.. now other characters in a different world and different power systems??? character designs seem okay. they exist? until they dont? stability is on break and doesnt seem to be coming back aoon background is same as story development