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Thks for the chapter

Thanks for the update really good chapter hopefully next one soon

Clearly you didn’t read it because he does get a dragon, if you like powerfantasys ok this isn’t one of them. The story is really good and is close enough to how an actual story in that universe would be.

Author clearly knows nothing about Naruto, if you want an edgy story with no real depth and accurate lore representation then this is your story but if you want an actual Naruto fanfic then skip it. Sure mc is evil but he’s also very stupid and morally makes zero sense, firstly Itachi couldn’t have killed mcs younger brother as after killing Izumi family photo saw Itachi nearly break and offered to kill the woman and children so it wasn’t Itachi who killed them. Secondly Itachi was just a child and so was sasuke so the mc who has knowledge of two lives thus should be a bit mature and not act like a child and immediately kill Itachis brother. If you wanted the mc to be against Itachi you could’ve done it if he didn’t have memories of naruto but now that he does it makes no sense as he would’ve understood that killing the uchiha was the only choice Itachi had, add that to the fact that there would’ve been no way the mc would’ve been spared if he was in the clan compounds.

She seems better than yuna but still not good, I mean telling a victim of abuse right after they’ve just begun to end things with the abuser that the only reason you helped them is because you like them is very manipulative

Do you write in standard or dialect

Thanks for the chapter rlly good story

This is so good btw I hope rio doesn’t forgive them

Honestly very interesting has a lot of potential but I hope it doesn’t get boring and falls into the classic novel trope

Really good hope for more chapters. The story is really interesting as the mc needs to find his way into actually getting stronger and somehow surviving