I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.

that is cool

damn, that was a lot to take in

I think the author should other words than dumbfounded all the time