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GrammarPolice2yrCommentedA John Constantine-esque look?
Currently I look like a regular teen, sandy blonde hair, rather tall at 6"3, bigger build, wearing regular jeans and a black Tshirt.- GrammarPolice2yrCommented
I think that rewriting it was for the best, not that I didn't like it, it was just to chaotic .
This chapter has been deleted. - GrammarPolice2yrReplied to Dertonel"Hurry it up. I didn't get kidnapped for you to just watch." He said, clearly annoyed. Her face instantly turned from bliss to devotion.
- GrammarPolice2yrCommented
Kinda lame considering everything else he endured
I blacked out. - GrammarPolice3yrReplied to CountWatermelonTM
They don't know the full extent of his quirk for all they know he can take down some petty thief with a weak quirk. And of course the story is going to unrealistic, their in a world with superpowers, I'm talking about how realistic the world is inside the laws of that world, for example of child murderer would have normally be excused with some punishment if the child had no idea he was doing something wrong, but if said child had an intelligence quirk that's a whole different story. Back to the story the way their handling the MC is completely unrealistic to the set out laws of that world from what they should understand is their dealing with a child that wanted to protect something and all they know is that the source of his power is his plants, handcuffing him is completely unnecessary.
- Well the proposal is the following, Mrs. Midnight will adopt and take care of you until you become an adult. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented
How big is Beru right now?
Hope you liked the chapter. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented
Despite being immature she has morals, what kind of bull is this. She became a hero if she was weak willed enough to fall to a child's words she wouldn't be a hero.
- I want you to help me sell a new type of drug. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented- What if I sell drugs without side effects.
- GrammarPolice3yrReplied to CountWatermelonTM
It's unrealistic still, deku got off scott free despite having no quirk and being a minor, practically forcing a minor to be adopted is stupid in the context.
- Well the proposal is the following, Mrs. Midnight will adopt and take care of you until you become an adult. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented
That sounded so stale
-Stop criminals. Midnight said. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented
No Sun Shroom?
A pea, a flaming pea (which he ended up testing first), an electric cactus, a dark sunflower (to be able to get energy at night) and the original sunflower. - GrammarPolice3yrReplied to A_reader_for_fun
Burger King sucks in the U.S I went to a few in england and boy did yhe do America dirty...
"Don't worry, I won't work at a McDonald's, I'll find somewhere else to work. I'm thinking of just working at a PetSmart or something." Gan continued to eat the last of his food before standing up. - GrammarPolice3yrCommentedA/N: Just became 20 years old now... I feel old... 19 made me feel young and like a kid...
- GrammarPolice3yrCommentedAh, naruhodo.
- GrammarPolice3yrCommentedAnd he just stares at it. This truck is also staring right back at him. The engines rev up before the truck starts speeding right towards our guy. He panics. A fail on his part because he should know that to die by truck-kun is an honour.
- GrammarPolice3yrReplied to Tyrant1103
my grandma lives there...
At this time, in a place located in Florida live a boy name Gan, who was currently 16 years old. School was out and all he did was play video games; mainly his Sword Version. Gan was watching one piece as of now, it was Luffy vs Kaido. - GrammarPolice3yrReplied to Kenrio
The laws of the pokemon world are different than our world, they might not be able to understand what sound waves are because although they may have discovered it they may have thought them insignificant. Also sound is not on the electromagnetic spectrum, those two phrases may have the word wave but they can be two completely different things like ocean waves or mechanical waves
Another point is that Alex is very confident in training Zubat. From its name of Zubat, it is not difficult to understand what the Innate Ability of this Pokémon is. That's right, the sound wave is Zubat's Innate Ability. And Alex, as a modern person, has a better understanding of how sound waves work than the normal people in this world. - GrammarPolice3yrReplied to 0_Jordinio_0It was an older girl, decently tall by the looks of it, though my eyes settled on a different feature to her. Mainly, her big ol round ass.
- GrammarPolice3yrCommented
wouldnt be fazed*
Allan was really not worried that Chrollo would renege on his words since he was the leader of the Gen'ei Ryodan. Let alone 100 million, even if it was 1 billion, he would be fazed. - GrammarPolice3yrCommented
As if it wasn't tense before...
The Atmosphere in the Ship became tense as Allan just stared at Chrollo without relaxing.